please help me to check grammar and content especially economic content and logic econometrics

This paper is about econometrics. (we using STATA, then analyze the result)

Please help me to check the grammar and Economic logic of this paper. Please highlight all changes you made (using red color or any)

Also, please check “results” part. It includes significance level, F-test, etc. Please according to regression and equation to check.

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