application appeal revision

Hi! I need to write an appeal for my application denial for my university. I need it to sound very professional and very sincere because I cant afford to lose a semester due to my lack of transferable units. If someone could please make it a little more sencere because I’m horrible at writing letter. That’ll be greatly appreciated.

Dear Committee Members:

I recently received notification from __________ informing me that I have been denied admission for Fall 2020 due to not having enough transferable units. However, I believe I should be admitted to _________ for the following reasons:

I submitted my transcript online which totaled up to 49 transferable units. I’ve taken 3 more classes after I submitted my transcripts and am taking 3 more classes which equal up to 17 extra units.

This is all I have right now.

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