The assignment is to create an informational literature review on 12 sources, at least 7 of which must come from scholarly journals. The topic is evidence that can be obtained and how the evidence can be used in police sciences and forensics. Different types of evidence should be thoroughly discussed, as well as different types of firearms. However, the paper has the following problems:
Right now the paper focuses too much on investigators. The sole focus should be the evidence, and discussing what investigators do with it.
The paper uses bullet points. These are not allowed. Should be in paragraphs.
Sentence structure and flow of the paragraphs can be improved.
There is a section on purpose of the crime scene which should be omitted. Instead focus on the evidence from firearms, and how its use is evolving.